I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome work this week Holly. You answered the questions for the reading task very well. I also like how you have split some of your maths questions into multiple slides so you could show us your maths thinking. I enjoyed reading your planning slide for the STEAM challenge and I can tell you have thought hard about all the things you needed to consider. I especially like how you used Google Maps to search for an area that you could have your mural art painted on.
I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing from this week. I found it very entertaining and I like how your character is almost retelling her own story. I also like how you left it as a cliff hanger, this is a great way to keep the reader hooked and make them want to know what happens next.
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Awesome work this week Holly. You answered the questions for the reading task very well. I also like how you have split some of your maths questions into multiple slides so you could show us your maths thinking.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your planning slide for the STEAM challenge and I can tell you have thought hard about all the things you needed to consider. I especially like how you used Google Maps to search for an area that you could have your mural art painted on.
I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing from this week. I found it very entertaining and I like how your character is almost retelling her own story. I also like how you left it as a cliff hanger, this is a great way to keep the reader hooked and make them want to know what happens next.