I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great work this week Holly. I really enjoyed reading the answers you had for the must read texts. You have answered the math questions really well, and I like how you have set your slides how nicely. The fort you made for this weeks STEAM challenge is amazing! I really like how you shows the different steps you took to create this. I can tell you thought hard about what you should include in your fort to make it enjoyable for everyone. I enjoyed reading both of your writing tasks, and liked the points you used to back up your thinking in your letter.
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Great work this week Holly. I really enjoyed reading the answers you had for the must read texts. You have answered the math questions really well, and I like how you have set your slides how nicely. The fort you made for this weeks STEAM challenge is amazing! I really like how you shows the different steps you took to create this. I can tell you thought hard about what you should include in your fort to make it enjoyable for everyone.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading both of your writing tasks, and liked the points you used to back up your thinking in your letter.
Keep up the great work!