I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great work Holly. I really enjoyed reading your answers for the reading task, and you have done a good job evaluating character traits. I also enjoyed seeing all of your maths thinking when answering your chosen math questions.
I like how you included different pictures of the animals you used to create your mini beast, this helps the reader create a picture in their mind. The story you wrote about your mini beast was also awesome to read. You have done a create job with this weeks tasks, keep it up!
Hi Holly ,This is Sofia I like your steam project you did it sounds very interesting and it would be cool to see what it would look like in real life and it lives in a very interesting place but I think it is very cool and great job.
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Great work Holly. I really enjoyed reading your answers for the reading task, and you have done a good job evaluating character traits. I also enjoyed seeing all of your maths thinking when answering your chosen math questions.
ReplyDeleteI like how you included different pictures of the animals you used to create your mini beast, this helps the reader create a picture in their mind. The story you wrote about your mini beast was also awesome to read. You have done a create job with this weeks tasks, keep it up!
Hi Holly ,This is Sofia I like your steam project you did it sounds very interesting and it would be cool to see what it would look like in real life and it lives in a very interesting place but I think it is very cool and great job.
ReplyDeleteHey Holly,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you showed images to your mini beast - it made it alot easier to picture !
Next time maybe you could create your own slides instead of the other one?