I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome work this week Holly. I really like how you set out your food pyramid and your burger using te reo. The DLO you made about a balanced diet is also great. You have included important information and made it easy to read and understand.
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I think that this is a awesome slideshow I enjoyed reading it.
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Awesome work this week Holly. I really like how you set out your food pyramid and your burger using te reo. The DLO you made about a balanced diet is also great. You have included important information and made it easy to read and understand.
ReplyDeleteRemember to make a statement about your learning at the beginning of your blog post. What were you learning this week? Also add a question at the end for the reader, e.g. "Do you know what the food groups are?"