I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I really like the photo collage you make and I think all the pictures you included are definitely a part of NZ culture.
Remember to let the reader know why you made this photo collage. For example you could have said "This photo collage was one of the 'Create' options for this weeks LCS. We had to make a photo collage of NZ culture or any culture of our choice"
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice job Holly.
ReplyDeleteI really like the photo collage you make and I think all the pictures you included are definitely a part of NZ culture.
Remember to let the reader know why you made this photo collage. For example you could have said "This photo collage was one of the 'Create' options for this weeks LCS. We had to make a photo collage of NZ culture or any culture of our choice"